Wang Chung

Very interesting. It was well written. Simply written, but well done nonetheless. I enjoyed how you gave us a glimpse of the second chapter, giving us a peek at what's ...

I'm new to poetry, so feel free to disregard anything that I say, but this was WAY to short. *Scrolls down to bottom of page, rubs eyes in disbelief* Where's ...

A hole in the earth that had suddenly cracked open underneath us, and we fell into the gullet of...

Chapter Two "I told you, honey, I don't want that man in my house." "But he's my brother!" Frank Shaw wiped his brow, beads of perspiration clinging to his hand. ...

Chapter One "Hello, Dr. Greene." "Hello, Abram. What would you like to discuss today?" Abram Waters fixed him with his cold, hard stare. Dr. Henry Greene shifted uncomfortably in his ...

Great, but one question. Where's the rest? I want to know more! You mention that he is half-human in th title. What does this mean? You don't have to tell ...

I know this is criminally short, but the rest of the story won't be. I promise! ******************************************* Once upon a time, a monster came to the little town of Hangleton. ...

The writing was quite good, however, you have made many grammar errors, so you need to look over this a couple times and fix them. I wish you would have ...

I quite liked it. I would like to see this character in a story somewhere. She's completely three-dimensional, and the way you described her was great. However, you seem to ...

Unlike what the other memebers have stated, I quite liked the beginning. It was simply set up, but it worked. The writing was quite good, you described Harry's descent into ...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I HATE "And then I woke up" endings! Also, the story needs alot more description, and try for some originality. Aliens abducting someone and performing experiments on them... Co

The writing is very basic and straightforward, trying adding some more exotic words to your vocabulary. Also, I really despise "And then I woke up" endings, and although it's not ...

A wonderful demonstration of how a child's mind works, and to think you thought of this while lying in bed! I'm probably reading a little to much into this, but ...

Your story is fantastic. Overall, it has very Douglas Adams type feel to it, not only in the writing, but in the story as well. I'm sure you know who ...

Today was my first day at Clifford Elementary. It started off dreadfully, but by the end of the day I was as happy as the smiling sun I drew in ...